Posted on March 14, 2008
Your Crying Song
taking your disease,
and suffering longly
with this sad pain…
who knew you
were handing out freely,
those aches of shame;
your crying song
3-13-08
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Zuzanna said on April 6, 2008
James ~ Sad, thought provoking poem.
Depth of feelings in your expressions.
I could relate to this.
Thank you,
Zuzanna
Anonymous said on April 21, 2008
Brief but powerful. This may sound weird, but the spacing used between the lines…I found it particularly moving. I’m not sure why…it just seemed to let each line resonate…or maybe hit like a punch. You still feel it afterward. "handing out freely, those aches of shame;" I think this is my favorite. It epitomizes this poem’s ability to grasp a great deal of feeling, in a concise statement. Bravo.