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Fruitful

Posted on March 14, 2008

Fruitful

dancing on the vine,

and rejoicing herein

beaming summer rays…

surely this be, but one,

of the coming down

shinning glory days

3-13-08


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One response to “Fruitful”

  1. This is a good word picture, where you have taken in the title just one word, and expanded nicely on it. This poem has warmth, and hope and sparkle.
    Good job.

    Fruitful

    dancing on the vine, (nice)

    and rejoicing herein

    beaming summer rays… (nice)

    surely this be, but one, ("surely this MUST be…"??)

    of the coming down (coming down…as in "approaching", "on the way"…)

    shinning glory days (typo: "shining")

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