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Sad Love Affair

Posted on March 14, 2008

Sad Love Affair

I listen

so intently,

for some

whisper,

to come

here sweetly…

but often

I stand,

and tire

into dismay

3-13-08


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One response to “Sad Love Affair”

  1. Sad Love Affair

    I listen

    so intently,

    for some

    whisper,

    to come

    here sweetly… (nice… "intently" and "sweetly"..)

    but often

    I stand,

    and tire

    into dismay ("Tire into dismay" I like that. This could be a romantic love affair between boy and girl, but also the way a writer poet feels about his or her offerings into cyberspace…??)

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