James_K._Blaylock

Sad Love Affair

Posted on March 14, 2008

Sad Love Affair

I listen

so intently,

for some

whisper,

to come

here sweetly…

but often

I stand,

and tire

into dismay

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One response to “Sad Love Affair”

1. Sad Love Affair

   I listen

   so intently,

   for some

   whisper,

   to come

   here sweetly… (nice… "intently" and "sweetly"..)

   but often

   I stand,

   and tire

   into dismay ("Tire into dismay" I like that. This could be a romantic love affair between boy and girl, but also the way a writer poet feels about his or her offerings into cyberspace…??)

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