Posted on March 13, 2008
The Sweetest Nectar
tasting the sweetest nectar,
of a coming tomorrow…
is so much more better
than focusing only upon
today’s souring bitterness
3-09-08
Posted on March 13, 2008
The Sweetest Nectar
tasting the sweetest nectar,
of a coming tomorrow…
is so much more better
than focusing only upon
today’s souring bitterness
3-09-08
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Francis Meyrick said on March 14, 2008
You like playing with contrasts, don’t you? Steering us one way, and then veering the opposite way…
The Sweetest Nectar
tasting the sweetest nectar,
of a coming tomorrow… (nice)
is so much more better
than focusing only upon
today’s souring bitterness (nice, sharp, contrast)
(souring bitterness: powerful, very strong…)