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The Sweetest Nectar

Posted on March 13, 2008

The Sweetest Nectar

tasting the sweetest nectar,

of a coming tomorrow…

is so much more better

than focusing only upon

today’s souring bitterness

3-09-08


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One response to “The Sweetest Nectar”

  1. You like playing with contrasts, don’t you? Steering us one way, and then veering the opposite way…

    The Sweetest Nectar

    tasting the sweetest nectar,

    of a coming tomorrow… (nice)

    is so much more better

    than focusing only upon

    today’s souring bitterness (nice, sharp, contrast)
    (souring bitterness: powerful, very strong…)

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