Cool Drowning

Posted on January 19, 2008

Cool Drowning

drinking deeply of

the cool drowning;

and so what if

it hurts, sometimes…

because in the end

you’d done it all for

that forever swimming

1-12-08


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1 response to Cool Drowning

  1. These are interesting phrases:

    "drinking deeply of
    the cool drowning;"

    and "that forever swimming"

    Your use of English is creative. Kind of novel.

    It’s good.

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