Cool Drowning
Posted on January 19, 2008
Cool Drowning
drinking deeply of
the cool drowning;
and so what if
it hurts, sometimes…
because in the end
you’d done it all for
that forever swimming
1-12-08
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These are interesting phrases:
"drinking deeply of
the cool drowning;"
and "that forever swimming"
Your use of English is creative. Kind of novel.
It’s good.