A Simple Act Of Kindness
Posted on June 10, 2008
A SIMPLE ACT OF KINDNESS
“I cannot make a difference “
we hear that said often each day
however, no one suggested
to changing the World
in a very simple way
with just one smile or a kind deed
yes, change the World, this may.
It matters not the size of one
or a beauty of a creed
excuses are for the lazy ones
they are not the kind we need
one open heart filled with love
can change this World of greed
a smile could be your own
would start a simple deed.
Changing the World in a better way
doing our part indeed…
to build an eternal friendship
no matter the distance
for what use would to it there be
if I could not live to say
having a good time while I am here
that can also end one day.
Planning a good time for another week
Not knowing…that the World
Might end today?
Not showing signs of sadness
let the courage stands tall
it really takes only act of kindness
to remember…one person to make a difference
love with a simple dream and a wish
“One million dollar ” smile for one
to feel how they stand above all.
© 2008 Zuzanna
Last edited by Zuzanna on June 12, 2008, 11:10 am
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Hi Zuzannah. I sure agree with the sentiment expressed.
Just pondering the world’s problems, and our own insignificance, can drive you crazy. Best start with one step at a time, eh?
It’s some kind of ‘balance’ that keeps us forging ahead. Some people live in boxes, and don’t live or think outside that box. Others are so overwhelmed by the enormity of it all, they are hell to live with…
Couple of small things for you maybe to have a look at:
(A?)SIMPLE ACT OF KINDNESS
"I cannot make a difference"
we hear the (That?) say (said?)often each day
("often each day"…. doesn’t quite sound right. )
however, no one said (suggested?)
to change (changing?) the World
in a very single (simple?)way
(with?) just one smile or a kind deed
yes, change the World, this may.
It matters not the size of one
or a beauty of a creed
excuses are for the lazy ones
they are not the kind we need
one open heart filled with love
can change this World of greed
a smile could be your own
would start a simple deed.
Changing the World in a better way
doing our part indeed
digging (building?) an eternal friendship
no matter the distance
for what use would to (it?) (there?) be
if I could not live to say
having a good time while I am here
that can also end one day.
Planning a good time
for another week not knowing
that the World might end today
not showing signs of sadness
let the courage stands tall
it really takes only act of kindness
to remember
one person to make a difference
love with a simple dream and a wish
"One million dollar" smile for one
to feel how
they stand above all.
Good Day Francis
Thank you so much for the lovely help with the grammar correction.
I am trying to train my mind the best I can…Smile.
Thank you also for your time to evaluate.
With sincere appreciation,
Zuzanna
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A man would do well to carry a pencil in his pocket and write down the thoughts of the moment.
Those that come unsought are commonly the most valuable and should be secured, they seldom return
– Francis Bacon
This is very uplifting and empowering. It made me feel revived and hopeful. I can only pray this hopeful optimism will spread like wildfire to those who need its softly burning message the most. You are a beacon, and it shows through your writing. This can make an overwhelming difference in the world. Thank you.