Ugly Punch
Posted on May 10, 2008
Ugly Punch
hazing from the sunrise,
for its eyeing me, and
unfriendly doing so…
why, did I take that much;
knowing today would surely
offer only more ugly punch
5-2-08
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I love the sunrise, every morning. Never thought of it as an "ugly punch".
Strikes me as a great piece of poetry, you could maybe ascribe to a lonely, embittered alcoholic, sitting on a beautiful Hawaiian beach, contemplating his Destiny?
You should try some short sketches, and work the poetry into the sketch.