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Ugly Punch

Posted on May 10, 2008

Ugly Punch

hazing from the sunrise,

for its eyeing me, and

unfriendly doing so…

why, did I take that much;

knowing today would surely

offer only more ugly punch

5-2-08


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One response to “Ugly Punch”

  1. I love the sunrise, every morning. Never thought of it as an "ugly punch".
    Strikes me as a great piece of poetry, you could maybe ascribe to a lonely, embittered alcoholic, sitting on a beautiful Hawaiian beach, contemplating his Destiny?

    You should try some short sketches, and work the poetry into the sketch.

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